Level 1 – Professional Script Notes

Get clear, studio-level feedback on what’s working, what isn’t, and how to move your script forward. This level is ideal if you want a seasoned outside eye without changing a word on the page.

• Careful read of your script (feature, pilot, or short).

• Multi-page written notes covering concept, structure, character, dialogue, pacing, and commercial potential.

• Big-picture diagnosis plus concrete next steps for your next draft.

• Delivery as a written report, with an optional short add-on call if you’d like to discuss the notes live.

PROFESSIONAL SCRIPT NOTES

Level 2 – Notes + Mentoring

Everything in Level 1, plus hands-on development help and coaching so you’re not revising in the dark. This is for writers who want to learn the craft as they improve the script.

• In-depth notes with specific suggestions: alt scene ideas, structural options, character adjustments, and sample dialogue pitches.

• One live Zoom (or phone) session to walk through the notes, ask questions, and brainstorm solutions.

• One follow-up read of your revised draft with a shorter round of targeted notes to make sure the changes are landing.

NOTES AND MENTORING

SCRIPT DOCTOR AND REWRITE

Level 3 - Script Doctor and Rewrite

When the concept is strong, but the draft needs a professional pass, this level brings in a “script doctor” to do the heavy lifting.

• Initial assessment of your script and goals, followed by a clear rewrite plan outlining priorities and approach.

• One full rewrite pass by an experienced, produced screenwriter, focusing on structure, character, dialogue, pacing, and tone while preserving your core vision.

• Delivery of a clean revised draft plus, if desired, a version with tracked changes and a brief memo explaining the major creative choices.

Level 4 – Concept-to-Screenplay

Bring an idea; walk away with a production-ready script. This level is for producers, directors, and creators who have a concept but need a professional writer to execute it.

• Development of your idea into a logline and detailed step outline or treatment for your approval before pages are written.

• Writing of a complete first draft based on the approved outline, followed by one structured revision round based on your notes.

• Regular check-ins during the process (Zoom/email) so the script aligns with your vision, budget level, and target market.

CONCEPT TO SCREENPLAY