Level 2 – Notes + Mentoring
Everything in Level 1, plus hands-on development help and coaching so you’re not revising
in the dark. This is for writers who want to learn the craft as they improve the script.
• In-depth notes with specific suggestions: alt scene ideas, structural options,
character adjustments, and sample dialogue pitches.
• One live Zoom (or phone) session to walk through the notes, ask questions, and
brainstorm solutions.
• One follow-up read of your revised draft with a shorter round of targeted notes to
make sure the changes are landing.
Level 2 – Notes + Mentoring
Everything in Level 1, plus hands-on development help and coaching so you’re not revising
in the dark. This is for writers who want to learn the craft as they improve the script.
• In-depth notes with specific suggestions: alt scene ideas, structural options,
character adjustments, and sample dialogue pitches.
• One live Zoom (or phone) session to walk through the notes, ask questions, and
brainstorm solutions.
• One follow-up read of your revised draft with a shorter round of targeted notes to
make sure the changes are landing.